Ji Hwan Kim(김지환)/b-2 free writing/summer 56

Men are not prisoners of fate, but only prisoners of their own minds.- Franklin D. Roosevelt

 

2. People with which birth order seem to have the easiest lives? The most difficult ones? The happiest ones? The most appealing lives? Choose one and describe it by telling what makes those lives easy, difficult, happy, or attractive.

 

 I think the oldest child will live the most difficult. They should be parental, responsible, and capable, because the later children could imitate them or learn something from them. So parents may stern to the first child to prevent them from dishonesty, unkind, and bad behaviors. The first child may have fear of their parents. And parents want the first kids to achieve higher goals, for example passing particular university, working in the major company. The first children must effort more to achieve the goals. They should study more instead of playing with friends. So I think the first children live difficult. And the happiest ones are the youngest children. Their parents may stern not to them, because they are youngest in the family. Parents think often the youngest children are less capable, less responsible and weaker than older siblings. And their older siblings show them what is wrong and right. So they can learn before they do something or make a plan. For this reason I sure that the youngest children live easier than the first children. And my most appealing live is the only child's live. The only children grow up being the apple of his family's eye. I think that parents may not stern to the only children. Because they have not younger siblings and the parents could concentrate their love to the only children. The only children have no sibling, so they need to be not responsible, capable. If they cannot do something, their parents can intensively help them. So I appeal to the only children's life

 

Main idea: The first child lives most difficult, on the contrary to this, the youngest children have the easiest lives. And I appeal to the only children's lives.

 

Supporting sentence (the first children)

1. They should be parental, responsible, and capable, because the later children could imitate them or learn something from them.

2. So parents may stern to the first child to prevent them from dishonesty, unkind, and bad behaviors.

3. Parents want the first kids to achieve higher goals

 

Supporting sentence (the youngest children)

1. Their parents may stern not to them

2. They can learn before they do something or make a plan

 

 

 

Supporting sentence (the youngest children)

1. The only children grow up being the apple of his family's eye.

2. Parents may not stern to the only children

3. The only children have no sibling, so they need to be not responsible, capable.

4. If they cannot do something, their parents can intensively help them.

 

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