Either couple who has loved each other for just a few months or long years may want to marry at last. They think their marriage will be different from others and predict only happy future. Unfortunately, a lot of married couples divorce today for several reasons. First, difference in personality is the biggest reason of a divorce. Couples get to know some points of the other's personality which they did not know before marriage and these things can be either positive or negative. If these points are negative, then people who cannot tolerate them want to split up. Second reason is a partner's affair. I consider this reason as the worst cause of a divorce. People who cheat on his or her partner do it because they do not love the other anymore or just for fun. However, affair is an immoral act and it hurts the other's mind. Finally, money problem is also a cause for a divorce. Lack of money makes the marriage difficult and might lead to the end of a marriage. Supporting expense for children or parents can be a typical reason for money problem. In conclusion, married couples get divorced usually because of a personality difference, a partner's affair and economic issues.
I think your points on the reason why married couples get divorced is very clear. The structure of the essay is concise and clear, so i think you will just need to write on. At the same time, I think it would be better if there are examples for each reasons of divorcement. Also, try to avoid writing a typical essay by showing your voice. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteIn addition, I think it will be better to form it up into paragraphs!
ReplyDeleteKim, Jusung / PSD